Hello Bloggers Today I worked on show don't tell and show don't tell is when you tell them e.g kade was happy you would have to show this sentence without saying he is happy.
Tell: Kade was shocked
Show: Jaw dropped on his face making an mouth formed o and his heart beating a million miles a minute as he gasps. His eyes widened as his skin turns pale as white.
Tell: Ava was excited to see her dad
Show: Jumping up and down she talked very fast and high pitched and her heart can not stop beating. Her eyes sparkle and widened as she ran to her dad.
Tell: Zion-Li felt sad
Show: Her eyes drooped and her lip quivered as tears built up in her eyes slowly as the tears rolling down her cheek. She dropped her head while looking down at the floor.
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