Hello Bloggers this is my 'When I'm or I am' poem and it tells
what I am going to do in the future.
what I am going to do in the future.
When I am Ten I will go to the famous disney land that people always talk about in NZ
When I am Eleven I will play with my cousins on there PS4 all day long completing missions
When I am Twelve My sister will be Eleven and I will be in Intermediate and she will be still in primary learning
When I’m Thirteen I will get my favourite pet in the whole wide world
When I’m Fourteen I will make a fuss of doing my mums and dads chores
When I am Fifteen I will not want to go out and do the long shopping for my parents.
When I am Sixteen I will want to buy this ferrari that I longed for 6 years from when I was 6
When I am Seventeen I will buy a Fluffy dog that is a husky and we will be Best friends forever
When I am Eighteen I longed to go in the black ferns sweating while playing and practicing in the backyard
When I am Nineteen I will dramatically beg my parents to go to the ball with My friends or a boy
When I’m Twenty I will study hard to get good grades in University
When I am Twenty One I will get my own house with a cool pool
Hello,
ReplyDeleteI am Alodia from room 8. I liked how you listed everything very clearly so your audience can understand what you're saying. You know, some of the writing is going off the page. You might need to fix that. Other than that, everything is nice. I also liked how you had a little description at the beginning.
g2g,
🐢🐁Alodia🐁🐢
Kia ora Alodia. Thanks for your comment. A challenge that I faced well doing this was what I might do in the future. Yes I will try to fix the mistake
DeleteHave you ever tried to do genia.ly with pictures???
Blog ya later
Ariella-brooke
Hi Ariella-Brooke I like how you are going to play on the PS4 all day and finish mission with your cousins.I wonder what is your favourite pet.And that is pretty weird that you said that you will beg to go to the ball with a boy😅😕 but it is when your older so that is fine. BY:Isabella-Charis
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ariella-Brooke, I like how you predicted what will happen when your older. Imagine if it all happened, Would you be happy? I like how you said that when your 17, you will beg to go to the ball with your friends or a boy😂
ReplyDeleteI wonder what will happen when your 22,23,24,25 etc!
Good Job!
-Taylah😁