Writing Wk 8 Day 1

Hey bloggers this is my writing that I had done 

Hopefully you would enjoy the Story

What would you write if you saw this?????

In a land where no kids could ever be as smart and annoying lived a brother and a sister. They would always play with planes. The sister would always do her homework but this was no ordinary homework it was suddenly a paper plane one. Little did they both know that they were going to discover a adventures scary ride.

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"MUUUUUUUUUUUM, Darius won't let me have some space for my plane investigation" shouted Katelyn  "because your in the way of me playing sonic car racing season 4... I was going to come first" Darius was the oldest he was 13 and Katelyn was 11. She always wished that he at least just pay attention. For some reason when grandpa passed away we always started fighting. It was hard for them because Gramps would always come at the right time( Just in time not to get a grounding from our parents). We had breakfast at the table and it was very quiet "Thanks....... for uh breakfast mum and dad" "I wonder what happened to our daughter Katelyn" wondered Dad " I think it was when Dad Passed" mum said sadly. "Hurry up get to school Katelyn and Darius". The days went past and suddenly their mother shocked them with some exciting news. " Katelyn, Darius we are going to Las Angeles" they both looked at each other like they were going to explode. They rushed around the house for a few day's even though it was in a weeks time. " ok make sure you both behave over there ok" "yes mum".

A WEEKS TIME......

"rrrrrrrreeeeearrrrrrrrrrrrrr" sounds of planes flew past the airport. Jet star plane is waiting " c'mon kids lets go to gate 15 and get to that plane". crowds of people zoomed past like a gust of wind pushing against a kid. 'Whew' Katelyn thought to herself. We finally got on the plane. "sweeties lets go to the back where our seats are" exclaimed our mum. We got to the back but only two seats were there one for our dad and one for our mum. " ummmmm sweeties why don't you just sit on our laps" "Mum we are not three anymore and please don't embarrass us". Why don't we sit on the wing of the plane" Katelyn nervously said. " Don't mind if I do" sarcasmly said Darius "ok". We hopped on the wing. "ok off we go" I said. The plane took of.......

12 HOURS LATER

"let's not do that again" I said all tired and dirty "I agree" our eyes were wide opened and we looked paralyzed as well. " lets enjoy our summer at Las Angeles then" sang our mum........ 

THE END