Moon Landing 👑👑:

Here is my Moon Landing writing that we did for Writing. I enjoyed writing it but working out how to put similes in the sentences was challenging.

As the colossal ship slowly descended and crashed on the moon,the dust scattered on the Astronauts outfit roughly.

The shimmering night stars sparkled down on the rusty dusty moon as a dazzling site gazed upon the Astronauts.

The Astronauts eyes gazed upon the enormous earth that shimmered in the night           sky in space.

As the Astronauts descended into space they were satisfied of what they found and chemicals they were to collect  were something they found like no other…”Mayday Mayday Mayday come in come in houston” BOOM CRASH CRACK the ship did not have enough energy to keep the ship together”What…..is…...happ….i...ning” said one of the Astronauts that was in the space station. “I don’t….know” said the other.Static broke upon the calling of the other Astronauts on the moon…. Nothing happened they called again” Astronaut 1 are you there” no one answered, they searched the ship to see if the Astronaut was their and there he was just helping another Astronaut in the space station, instead of the ship to go home they tried to make something new...it was a new Astronaut spacecraft then went home. THE END